Breaking Friday evening red-penning!

It’s not that I don’t enjoy a fully-grown modern man invoking a curse against another fully-grown modern man.  I totally do.  It’s just that this letter from Cavaliers Majority Owner Dan Gilbert seems to also contain a little punctuation abuse.

Here’s a screen-cap, for posterity (edited only for layout).  Click to embiggen.

I was going to red-pen this, but it’s more fun like a puzzle.  How many things annoy YOU, Dear Reader?

4 comments ↓

#1 Colleen on 07.09.10 at 7:25 pm

This makes “my brain hurt!”

#2 Laura on 07.09.10 at 9:20 pm

Let’s start with the Comic Sans. Really not the font of choice for a rant.

#3 Gregm on 07.10.10 at 8:41 am

“What” does he think he is “communicating” to his public?

#4 Mike G. on 07.12.10 at 5:06 pm

Laura hit on the best part: this is a bitter, angry rant. . . written in Comic Sans! The rampant unnecessary quotations are just icing on the cake.

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