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		<title>Comment on Mens rea by Burlington Coat Factory: At least they&#8217;re consistent &#171; Red Pen Brigade</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2008/03/mens-rea/comment-page-1/#comment-7106</link>
		<dc:creator>Burlington Coat Factory: At least they&#8217;re consistent &#171; Red Pen Brigade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 13:01:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I&#8217;ve written about them before.  REPEAT OFFENDERS.  ch_client = &quot;manojt&quot;; ch_width = 300; ch_height = 250; ch_type = &quot;mpu&quot;; [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I&#8217;ve written about them before.  REPEAT OFFENDERS.  ch_client = &quot;manojt&quot;; ch_width = 300; ch_height = 250; ch_type = &quot;mpu&quot;; [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on SO MANY THOUGHTS by The Food Network makes me sad. And hungry. And sad. &#171; Red Pen Brigade</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2011/05/so-many-thoughts-food-network-chopped-ted-alle/comment-page-1/#comment-7097</link>
		<dc:creator>The Food Network makes me sad. And hungry. And sad. &#171; Red Pen Brigade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2012 13:05:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] style always.  I mean, it&#8217;s also good if you don&#8217;t completely misspell things (see previous post), but people working in foreign languages have been known to misspell things.  It&#8217;s less [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] style always.  I mean, it&#8217;s also good if you don&#8217;t completely misspell things (see previous post), but people working in foreign languages have been known to misspell things.  It&#8217;s less [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Higher standards for some people by Alden</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/02/higher-standards-for-some-people/comment-page-1/#comment-7056</link>
		<dc:creator>Alden</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2012 13:55:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, you&#039;re probably right.  My blog.  :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, you&#8217;re probably right.  My blog.  <img src='http://www.redpenbrigade.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Faith and disgust, Consumer Reports style by Jessica Poulin</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/02/consumer-reports-microwave/comment-page-1/#comment-7038</link>
		<dc:creator>Jessica Poulin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Feb 2012 13:41:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think this looks like an auto fill type form.  The ratings on C.R. are Excellent, Very Good, etc.  So, it seems like they just inserted the average rating in a pre-set verbiage???</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think this looks like an auto fill type form.  The ratings on C.R. are Excellent, Very Good, etc.  So, it seems like they just inserted the average rating in a pre-set verbiage???</p>
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		<title>Comment on Higher standards for some people by Verdigris</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/02/higher-standards-for-some-people/comment-page-1/#comment-6976</link>
		<dc:creator>Verdigris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Feb 2012 08:32:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What more unwholesome, dastardly joy is there, than to correct a brigadier? In your sentence-

&quot;And it occurs to me that one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference, it’s in the medical field.&quot;

-I believe you mean to say either-

&quot;And it occurs to me that if there&#039;s one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference, it’s in the medical field.&quot;

-or-

&quot;And it occurs to me that one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference is in the medical field.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What more unwholesome, dastardly joy is there, than to correct a brigadier? In your sentence-</p>
<p>&#8220;And it occurs to me that one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference, it’s in the medical field.&#8221;</p>
<p>-I believe you mean to say either-</p>
<p>&#8220;And it occurs to me that if there&#8217;s one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference, it’s in the medical field.&#8221;</p>
<p>-or-</p>
<p>&#8220;And it occurs to me that one place where a missing zero can make a pretty big difference is in the medical field.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Higher standards for some people by Bill</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/02/higher-standards-for-some-people/comment-page-1/#comment-6969</link>
		<dc:creator>Bill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Feb 2012 17:35:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Spaces between the time and a.m. and p.m. wouldn&#039;t hurt either.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Spaces between the time and a.m. and p.m. wouldn&#8217;t hurt either.</p>
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		<title>Comment on RPB gets all sophisticated-y! by Reporter #1</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/02/rpb-gets-all-sophisticated-y/comment-page-1/#comment-6938</link>
		<dc:creator>Reporter #1</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 03:23:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, I am fancy. I know how to use Keynote and export slides as images. FEAR MY SUPERIOR TECHNOLOGICAL SKILLS!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, I am fancy. I know how to use Keynote and export slides as images. FEAR MY SUPERIOR TECHNOLOGICAL SKILLS!</p>
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		<title>Comment on The perfect submish. by Q</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/01/the-perfect-submish/comment-page-1/#comment-6937</link>
		<dc:creator>Q</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 00:50:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In the restaurant&#039;s defense, based on the picture I&#039;m guessing the shopping plaza bought the sign. So, it&#039;s the shopping plaza&#039;s fault and since I&#039;m sure they charged the restaurant for it, the restaurant owner should give &#039;em hell!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In the restaurant&#8217;s defense, based on the picture I&#8217;m guessing the shopping plaza bought the sign. So, it&#8217;s the shopping plaza&#8217;s fault and since I&#8217;m sure they charged the restaurant for it, the restaurant owner should give &#8216;em hell!</p>
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		<title>Comment on I feel unclean and I cannot quite express why by Verdigris</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2012/01/volvo-icky/comment-page-1/#comment-6777</link>
		<dc:creator>Verdigris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 08:34:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The lack of capital &#039;F&#039; could be forgiven if they simply had the decency to add a period after &#039;life.&#039; The eeriness of the image is direct result of this unterminated phrase leaking its unbound soulstuff indiscriminately into the ether, like an unbandaged arterial wound in the English language itself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The lack of capital &#8216;F&#8217; could be forgiven if they simply had the decency to add a period after &#8216;life.&#8217; The eeriness of the image is direct result of this unterminated phrase leaking its unbound soulstuff indiscriminately into the ether, like an unbandaged arterial wound in the English language itself.</p>
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		<title>Comment on So much reading between the lines by Friendscome</title>
		<link>http://www.redpenbrigade.com/2011/09/so-much-reading-between-the-lines-fantastic-sams/comment-page-1/#comment-6721</link>
		<dc:creator>Friendscome</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Jan 2012 15:49:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>First of all. aostorpphes usually only show possesion of something. just because something end with an &quot;s&quot; doesn&#8217;t mean that it has an apostrophe. for ex., books. they cannot be in possesion of an object, therefore, they do not contain an apostrophe. the only other time that a word contains an apostrophe that isn&#8217;t in possesive form is if the word is a contraction such as can&#8217;t, won&#8217;t or don&#8217;t.secondly, whether the possesor of the object is plural or not can affect where you place the apostrophe. if the object is singular, the apostrophe goes before the &quot;s&quot;, as in &quot;John&#8217;s&quot;. But if the possessor is plural, then the apostrophe goes after the &quot;s&quot;, like in this sentence: the dogs&#8217; furs were each brown and black.  Was this answer helpful?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First of all. aostorpphes usually only show possesion of something. just because something end with an &quot;s&quot; doesn&#8217;t mean that it has an apostrophe. for ex., books. they cannot be in possesion of an object, therefore, they do not contain an apostrophe. the only other time that a word contains an apostrophe that isn&#8217;t in possesive form is if the word is a contraction such as can&#8217;t, won&#8217;t or don&#8217;t.secondly, whether the possesor of the object is plural or not can affect where you place the apostrophe. if the object is singular, the apostrophe goes before the &quot;s&quot;, as in &quot;John&#8217;s&quot;. But if the possessor is plural, then the apostrophe goes after the &quot;s&quot;, like in this sentence: the dogs&#8217; furs were each brown and black.  Was this answer helpful?</p>
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